My Review on sky warrior academy

http://karmareviews.blogspot.co.uk/2016/03/kuusen-madoushi-kouhosei-no-kyoukan.html

Eli Ayase wrote

Another one of those "watch it for the characters' interactions" anime. Shucks.

Not meaning to be rude but you should try proof reading a bit more as I've spotted several grammatical errors (majorly, run-on sentences). Also, just a me opinion, try not to repeat the same word over and over for conjunctive adverbs (however). I liked that your reviews are much more straight to the point than my own tho  :kek:

Thanks for reply, write it well drunk and no sleep in 2 days I think, Its not a bad anime just story is like walking along glass.