Writing Competition #1: Haiku

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Welcome to the first writting competition! 

Theme is freestyle. be creative!
Format is Haiku. I'm sure all know what they are. 

This one is 4, 6 4. 
First sentence 4 words.
Second sentence 6 word.
Third sentence another 4. 

Competition starts now and ends at Firday.

sand and scarlet
thunder 'pon withered fields
I'm home at last.

I'll leave the meaning up to the reader's interpretation.

4/6/4 syllables or words? Adapted for both:

syllables:

no cause, no seed
nothing under the shell
empty mirrors

 

water-soaked feet
eyes caught in webs of stars
things have their end

words:

no cause, no seed
no essence lurks under the shell
of an empty mirror

 

feet soaked in water
eyes caught in webs of stars
things have their end

Feel free to only take the first of these if there's a penalty against more than one!  ̄ω ̄

My heart is hers
My body lusts for her warmth
Moist we shall become

Remeber people its till Friday 9am pacific time. So ya can always edit your post till that time. Hence mine will be le best cause I'll have days to work on it \o/

Also voting will be on a diffenrent thread. 1 vote per person. Voting for yourself is auto DQ

No more?

She plunged into sadness
Finding out that all she needed
Was someone like you